Everyone’s advice is right on the money Travis. Don’t know of anything you do for the first time that more practice won’t improve. This fly will catch fish for you and sometimes “scruffy and rough” outfishes “perfect.
Keep up the good work.
That is a very nice first fly. My first rule is always "what will it look like wet" when tying wet flies and streamers. If you want to improve on your flies tie a few of the same in a row. Keep up the good work.
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