Looks better than my first Parachute Adams. One thing I would suggest is to try moving the post and the hackle more towards the hook eye. This will make the fly look more like a mayfly. Also, assuming you don't have any smaller hackle, try trimming the hackle around the post shorter for this size of hook. However this isn't bad for a first attempt, keep working on it 👍
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